NOTE – this is a ROUGH DRAFT Video…
We still have other footage and another shoot planned for next week with the New SCULPTAFIT All-In-One Home-Gym model arrives here NEXT WEEK!! (see photo below of newest model at our production partner’s warehouse)
This is part of the video that will be used for the official launch, whether is on Kickstarter.com or if I just do it directly.
I share this because YOU have been, and are, part of this amazing journey full of ups & downs, challenges and victories… And it means the world to me that I get to help YOU- and it is fun to share these preview steps with you…
You’ll notice the ladies use the name “SCULPTABOD” instead of the SCULPTAFIT Home-Gym because we recorded this footage *before* we all decided it needs to be named “The SCULPTAFIT Home-Gym”
PLEASE share any and all feedback below. Whatever is on your mind, PLEASE share that below… It will help us here as we work on the final draft of the videos.
BIG things on the horizon!!
Your trainer for LIFE
Joey Atlas
Congratulations, Joey!
I think the next version of the video would be much stronger if you were showing people actually using the gym while we listened to the voices of your clients talking about how great it is.
Well done Ani!! That is in the works 🙂
Hi Joey, this looks totally awesome and inspiring. I only wished it was going to be available over here in Australia. Looking forward to seeing the full release video where we can actually see the everyday person using this.
Thank you so much for everything you have done so far Joey and putting positivity into so many peoples lives including mine!
Nicole
Hi Nic! Don’t rule it out… I’m working on how I’ll be able to get these over the AU/NZ 🙂 (which part of AU are you in?)
Have you seen the video clips I have on youtube yet?
THANK YOU for being here and trusting in my methods for your journey!
Joey
Hi Joey, I live in Victoria Australia. It would be awesome if it was released over here to purchase! As for the YouTube clips I am about to head over to YouTube right now.
Nic ?
Awesome, Nic! 🙂 I want this in AU/NZ too! Working on that as well. Any questions, comments or thoughts on the youtube videos just let me know!
Joey
I would like to see it in action.
Also, since I am a wheelchair bound, disabled veteran, can you fit a wheelchair between the stands?
Thanks, David – more action clips coming soon (you can catch some here on my youtube channel: http://www.JoeyAtlas.TV
Great question – I’ve noticed the variety of wheel chairs out there… and with a littl more research, I’ll know which ones ( wheel base widths) can fit inside the space between the base rails.
ALL MY BEST
Joey
I apologize for the length of my comment, but I have a couple of thoughts/suggestions on the video. I hope you don’t find them too nitpicky.
To start off, the video and sound quality are fantastic. They make the video feel rather professional. I don’t know that I love that you can see everyone’s microphone, but the sound is definitely nice.
Joey, I feel like the parts of the video where you’re explaining the idea behind the machine and how people can get in on it (so, basically, the opening and closing parts) are a little choppy, visually. They would look better without the editing.
I know you’ve addressed this already but, as others have said, it would be nice to see the machine in action. Or at least a brief description of what exercises can be done on the machine. Additionally, before and after pictures of your clients would be a nice touch.
There are also a few pieces of the dialogue that need to be clarified or expounded upon. For instance, the lady who speaks at 2:12 says, “…modifications came along.” Is she talking about modifications to an exercise? To the machine?
The girl who speaks at 3:04 mentions that the machine has been helping her. It would be nice to know exactly how the machine has been helping. Also, I feel that she needs to pull her shirt up.
The lady who speaks at 3:20 says that 90% of treadmills at home are holding laundry. Obviously we know what she means by this, but is it a scientific fact?! I think that statement should be phrased as an opinion and that the number should probably be taken out.
I like that the majority of people in the video are wearing the same shirt, but I wish that the lady who starts talking right around the 2-minute mark and the girl at 3:04 were wearing it too. (That would also solve the issue with the girl’s shirt that I mentioned before.) It just looks a little weird to me to have them not wearing it when every other person is. I think, though, that it might look even better if some people were to wear a teal shirt with a black/gray logo or a black shirt with a teal/gray logo. Love those colors, by the way.
Finally, I love the closing line of, “Thank you for joining the movement.” It fits perfectly with the Sculptafit and the message and is a great way to end the video.
All in all, a job well done! Thanks for your constant hard work on improving the lives of those around you.
Laura, this is all awesome feedback! Thank you SO MUCH for taking the time to do this!!
Move to come! 🙂
J
Sounds great, but would love to see it used and would love to try it out myself. Is this possible?
Thanks, Karen! Have you seen the recent youtube videos I’ve been posting? ..we’ll be adding more footage ‘in use’ for sure!
If you are local you can surely try it out! Saint Johns, Florida?
Great job! The video is not too long and I think it covers all the important areas.
Thanks, Angelica!! 🙂
Hopefully when available it will have a workout chart with it, showing full use of it. Will it be available in Canada ? Affordable? Small enough?
Great job Joey!!
Hi Shirley! YES for Canada 🙂 Affordabale and 4×5 sqft footprint. We are building a video portal that will have new videos each month, community, Q & A sessions, etc… that will be a membership and will be for the entire family of a household.. We will be producing videos for all types of users, that you can access on tablet, smartphone, stream to TV, etc..
Lots more info here in case you missed this previous post: https://thejoeyatlas.com/ultimate-home-gym-q-and-a-sculptabod-genius-home-gym/
On the right path!! Great observations/suggestions leave little to add. Best of luck -and how much fun this stage of the journey must be!!
Awww, Thank you, Susan!! 🙂
This is exciting. Congrats on your accomplishments. Agree with the earlier comment about showing people using it; it would also be important to show people of different age ranges using the equipment. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks Joey!! YES – all of that is in the works 🙂 More to come!
It’s too long, sometimes repetitive, needs to be edited, which it can be easily to make it much better. All points in a row. Displaying the unit makes the promotion more informative, as well as showing someone using it, as others have already suggested.
Thanks Julia! We’ll be working these points you make into final cut!! 🙂
I agree that showing the machine in use would add exponential value.
For sure, Emily!! That footage is in the works 🙂
It’s great to hear from people that have achieved the results that they desire but I would love to see people actually using the gym! Best of luck to you!
Thanks, Rhonda! YES – that footage is coming soon! 🙂
length is fine, explanation is fine but as has been said it defeinitely requires video images of the ladies actually using the machine.
btw very curious about price and distribution (including affiliate program)
Ted, thanks for adding in here! Yes – we’ll be including footage of machine in use by women, me/men, my kids, etc…
Some Q/A from the past here: https://thejoeyatlas.com/ultimate-home-gym-q-and-a-sculptabod-genius-home-gym/
Launch will most likely be via Kickstarter (lowest price will be at launch) then roll into direct marketing model, and then open up to affiliate partners.
Awesome job Joey! I’m no professional, so I’m not one to say anything about editing and such, but I thought it was great. I thought the length of the piece was perfect. I agree with others on only one point…..the machine being used. I think your video will produce a lot of buyers. You are on your way! By the way, your daughter is a real cutie!! Can’t wait to have my own Sculptafit Home Gym!!!
Awesome to hear from you, Dori! 🙂 YES – that “in use” footage is in the works. Awww – thanks for the comps on my little bunny, Darah!
Stay tuned!!
Hi Joey
Great to see a vision take flight into reality.
I think a demo of the product included in the advertisement will give added perspective of possibility to potential customers, as mentioned by others already.
Maybe a white board or something like with a product name and logo visible in the background might add familiarity to potential customers for the product going forward.
Either way I’m sure you will make the necessary changes as suggested so far by so many supporters.
Everything else is perfect, sound and vision.
I wish you all the very best with this new adventure and as always I look forward to your influencing emails.
Kind regards
Gerard
Hi Gerard, thanks so much for this input!
All you’ve listed will be taken into account as we pull the pieces of the puzzle together 🙂
More to come!
Thanks for being here, Gerard
Joey
Joey,
Congrats on making your dream a reality. The video is perfect, you talk about what led you to making this come to life, the ladies that have been awarded the opportunity to try the machine seem to love it and how it has helped shaped their bodies and I know from being a faithful follower of you and your fitness routines and techniques this will be a success!!!!
Aww – Melisia! Thanks so much for your feedback here – it means a LOT!! 🙂